Why Do You Think The Editor Rejected This Submission? (BTW: This Is Not A Rhetorical Question.)

Remember that editor I told you about last time? His "edits" included deleting this whole section of my submission because he thought that: "This section did not fit as I had believed it would be more of a demographic study. Instead, would you be willing to share your experience with race as a Black woman? If so, 4-6 paragraphs of narrative with a low amount of commentary."

My Brief Reactions To His Comments:

"demographic": Wrong jargon sir.

"...as a Black woman?": Ugh, this stuff...

"...with a low amount of commentary.": Explícame, por favor: ¿qué está hablando? (No, for real, because my commentary is the BEST part!)